Mentalcase's Place

Been reading a lot of the response to ch 25 and just can't understand what people don't understand about the changes. Your characters psychology is well worked out and the scenario runs with how the story has been built to date. It seems like a lot of people want to ignore Danni's promise, from the hospital, to be more open and sharing of Mike with her sisters. I can also attest to your Nympho mode Beth as being accurate. Have you studied much psychology to be so in depth? or do you wing it?

Sat, 11 May 2013 07:23:08 -0500

I wing it, honestly. I think I have a pretty good understanding of human psychology, but for the most part its all just stuff from my head. Everyone is upset that I’m making Danni and Emma get intimate or that I’m taking the power away from Mike in the Domination department. A few things I’d like to say to them:

First, read it again. Danni and Emma don’t have sex. The most they do is kiss in a previous chapter. Danni isn’t in to girls anymore. She, for the most part, is just doing all of this because her brother and sister are really into it. Ever done something that you weren’t really in to just because someone you care about loved it? Of course you have.

As for Nympho mode. There was a girl in my jr high, and high school that was a nymphomaniac. She never got like Beth, where she could barely control it, but she never had any qualms about flashing her pussy in the lunch line, blowing someone behind the band hall, or various other sexual antics. That was in 9th grade. I lost track of her after that.

Are you just not writing anymore. If not that sucks you were my inspiration to start. Itd be a major let down.

Sat, 11 May 2013 07:15:10 -0500

I’m here guys, I promise. I’m still writing. Just having health issues. I’ll be back.

Are you still alive? There was a blast in Texas, and all I know is that you live in Texas.

Sun, 21 Apr 2013 14:55:20 -0500

Yep, i’m still here. It wasn’t close to where I live. :) No Worries.

Any update on Ch. 25 I check like 15 times a day

Tue, 16 Apr 2013 19:50:04 -0500

It’s Up Bud!

You ever feel like the ero lit gods have it out for you?

Sun, 14 Apr 2013 00:59:43 -0500

HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHHAHAHA *wheeze

*dies

*Slams face into desk over and over

Sat, 13 Apr 2013 14:22:38 -0500

Rejected. I dunno. I went over it again and deleted anything in reference to anything internet related. Sorry Folks. Trying again!

Sigh.

*SLAM!

What is it that you had to delete/change for literotica to accept your story?

Wed, 10 Apr 2013 21:01:02 -0500

I linked my tumblr site. I did that last time, and forgot that it kicked it out. Lemme ‘splain. On Chapter 24 I put mentalcase22.tumblr.com and it got kicked back. For chapter 25, I basically said, check my profile for a link to my tumblr to ask questions and get updates. It kicked it back again. Basically, putting tumblr gets it kicked. It’ll be up tomorrow or Friday. :)

Yo got all excited for 25 today and its not up yet I remember 24 had got kicked back same problem?

Wed, 10 Apr 2013 08:13:22 -0500

Exact same problem. Deleted what shouldn’t be there and resubmitted. Le sigh.

This is a personal question and I guess curiousity kills the cat. But what do you do and do you find it hard to fit writing JTSOU into your daily schedule? Also, do you read a lot of stories as well?

Fri, 05 Apr 2013 23:19:22 -0500

I’m the manager of a local business. I find it hard sometimes. As I’ve said in the past, I write best when I’m in the mood to write. I.E. when I feel the muse inspiring me. Given the subject matter, it also helps to be horny, and not tired. All three of these things occur, just not at the same time. Sometimes I’m in the mood to write, sufficiently turned on, and feel fine, but I’m not alone, or I have the schedule to finish for work. Basically, life happens. I write when I can.

I’m knee deep in a Dance of Dragons, at the moment. I don’t read much erotica however, as I find that the majority of the authors are complete shit. The ones that are good, better than I am, or even tolerable, I read when I need to glaze a knuckle. I’ve read most of the really good ones, in my opinion.

The only thing I’m not into, besides the homosexual genre, is the part of Loving Wives that deals with betrayal and revenge. Who wants to read that shit. I just lived it.

You're changing editors pretty frequently. What in your opinion is the main cause?

Fri, 05 Apr 2013 23:13:46 -0500

It’s a combination of not realizing how long a chapter is, and not having enough time to actually accomplish it. Editing can be tedious, boring work. Throw that in with basically something the length of a 30 page report, or term paper. I can remember spending weeks on a term paper in 7th grade and it was only 10 pages.

That being said, Drew has editing experience and is using an editing feature in MS Word to help us both speed up.

I really like your work, and I have two questions. How many chapters is there going to be in JTSOU series, and what do you plan to do when you have finished with it?

Fri, 05 Apr 2013 08:00:12 -0500

I’m not sure about how many chapters total. I don’t have a set number, only because I don’t get what I want done in each chapter. Sometimes it’s more, sometimes its less than I wanted to tell.

After I get it done, I’m writing an erotic horror story, and am considering branching out on stories with characters from Just the Six of Us.

YAYAYAYAYAYAY FINALLY CH. 25 but one question mental, are you happy? I hope you are (:

Thu, 04 Apr 2013 20:33:48 -0500

Yes, yes I am. :)

Hi, did you ever establish what happened to Zex? For the future, If you ever need a proofreader drop me a line, I've been in the publishing business for thirty years, so I think I might be of help

Thu, 04 Apr 2013 20:33:39 -0500

He had health issues. He also just removed the stories he wrote after a relative found out about them and caused a stir. Basically. I’m sure there’s more to it than that.

Chapter 25

Thu, 04 Apr 2013 19:08:06 -0500

Chapter 25 is submitted! Check back on Monday, or Tuesday. I don’t think weekends count on the mandatory 3 days. Who knows.

In other news, my first editor fell through, and a second option was chosen.

Welcome my new editor Drew. He got it and back to me in a single day. Awesomesauce baby.

Thanks for your patience gang!

have you found a new editor yet or heard anything from dex yet?

Tue, 02 Apr 2013 17:52:38 -0500

Yes, I’ve found an editor. He’s going by the pseudonym Slant. He’ll have it back ASAP. Thank you very much to the horde of applicants that I got. I’ll keep the best ones on top just in case Slant drops out. :)

Loving the story JTSOU so much I've read it 3 times this week. Can't wait to read c25. I just have to say how drawn into the story I get while reading and how attached to each character I get. Danni is my favourite tho you got her just right.

Tue, 02 Apr 2013 17:49:51 -0500

It’s coming :) Thanks for the praise.

You should put your chapter on dropbox and have your editor modifie and save it straight there so if 1 editor quit the next one can start where the previous left. Just a tought since you have been having lots of editor problem. Peace :-)!

Tue, 02 Apr 2013 17:49:24 -0500

I’ve found an editor, but I’ll look into dropbox.

Anything from Dex yet? It has been a few weeks since he started editing hasn't it?

Tue, 26 Mar 2013 18:24:55 -0500

It’s been about a month I’d guess. I haven’t heard from him, so something serious has come up or he’s just not interested anymore. At any rate, I’m searching for new editors. Send an email to mentalcase22@hotmail.com. Please consider what a big undertaking this is. 30 pages, single spaced in Word, 12 point font. It’s a big read.

Excited

Tue, 26 Mar 2013 18:23:31 -0500

Have you heard anything from your editor or perhaps maybe an estimated release date for Ch25? Sorry, just really excited XD

Do your own thing with your stories man. It's kind of annoying seeing people telling you what is good and what isn't. YOU'RE THE GENIUS BEHIND JTSOU. By no means am i accusing you of anything, i'm just begging you to write the stories the way you would like it. Add the hard twists and turns YOU feel are needed. Everything can't go smoothly, there has to be disappointment sometimes.(I might of just contradicted myself, but whatever), No matter which path you take these stories, we'll love em man!

Tue, 26 Mar 2013 18:22:52 -0500

I appreciate it. I know which way the story will go, what I’m going to write about, etc.